Comments on: Please critique my book! Is it good? Would you read it?

By: Samantha

Samantha — Tue, 01 Dec 2009 13:26:59 +0000

It was great, I really enjoyed it. I see you took my advice on the prologue (I critiqued it a few weeks ago.)
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By: ★~Alice Cullen~★

★~Alice Cullen~★ — Tue, 01 Dec 2009 12:37:59 +0000

Will you e-mail me more. My e-mail is open on my page
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By: darkseed

darkseed — Tue, 01 Dec 2009 11:52:59 +0000

this is pretty good. most people use "said" to much, but i think you need to use it a little bit more :p

There is definitely a lot of intelligent prose here. I would read.

Keep writing!
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abotu 10 years writing.

By: Georgia A

Georgia A — Tue, 01 Dec 2009 11:20:59 +0000

Of course i would buy it sounds like a great story i am sure this will be published soon
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By: LOve

LOve — Tue, 01 Dec 2009 10:59:59 +0000

HELL YA!! It is very good! I think the prologue really catches your attention fast, so you read more, then you want more and more, which is what authors need. Its so interesting!!! a most definate read!! I will buy this at Books-A-Million because this is SO getting published!
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By: less than three

less than three — Tue, 01 Dec 2009 10:11:59 +0000

Oh snap! You definitely caught me off guard and let me say this: This is the first story beginning on here that I would most definitely read. The other's are very iffy, but you did an expert job at quickly drawing me in. I want more!
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