Comments on: will you please read this piece of my book?

By: Ro J

Ro J — Mon, 26 Oct 2009 14:24:59 +0000

It ok, I don't think the topic is very strong.
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Askalotl — Mon, 26 Oct 2009 13:56:59 +0000

That is, without any hint of doubt in my mind, the worst passage of text that i have ever read.
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greg m — Mon, 26 Oct 2009 13:22:59 +0000

I’d like to read more.
V. Good!!!
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Jacob — Mon, 26 Oct 2009 13:05:59 +0000

make more paragraph stops, but other thank that, looks intresting
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Alix — Mon, 26 Oct 2009 12:42:59 +0000

great
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