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		<title>Where to buy service hours for probation in Hays County?</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[I was wondering if there are any places in San Marcos, Texas where you can buy service hours? Any help would be greatly appreciated
you buy it at the office
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I was wondering if there are any places in San Marcos, Texas where you can buy service hours? Any help would be greatly appreciated<br />
<br />you buy it at the office</p>
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		<title>Help me prevent another dog poisoning!?</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 23 Dec 2011 06:18:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I live out in the hill country of Texas, in Hays County.
We&#8217;ve always kept well-behaved, collared dogs who ran around as they pleased.  We feed any neighbor&#8217;s dog who wanders up, in the past they have done the same, just as long as the dog has a collar and tags.  We&#8217;re fanatical about [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I live out in the hill country of Texas, in Hays County.<br />
We&#8217;ve always kept well-behaved, collared dogs who ran around as they pleased.  We feed any neighbor&#8217;s dog who wanders up, in the past they have done the same, just as long as the dog has a collar and tags.  We&#8217;re fanatical about keeping up with their shots.</p>
<p>Over Thanksgiving, our 9 month old pup Sally was poisoned.<br />
This morning, I&#8217;ve awoken to another poisoned dog, our 2 month old rescue Bobby.<br />
Weak, listless, vomiting foam, bloody diarreah, dialated pupils, drooling, wobbly, drinking water like crazy, no appetite, just like our Sally did.</p>
<p>With the symptoms, the fact that the dogs never met and weren&#8217;t fed the same food, and the rampant incursions by coyotes in this area in the past three months, my family has agreed both were poisoned.<br />
Our cats are fine.  Our chickens are fine.  It&#8217;s just the outdoor dogs.</p>
<p>Please, give me some advice on how to prevent this happening again.  I&#8217;ve several younger siblings who love their outdoor dogs and now have none and I have a tiny indoor dog who goes out to play.  The one remaining dog is a valuable therapy pet.  I&#8217;ll be checking back repeatedly today.<br />
<br />The only way to stop it is to confine the dogs.  You already knew this, I&#8217;m sure.  Sounds like someone is poisoning the Coyotes, and your dogs are getting into it.  OR, someone around your place doesn&#8217;t like your dogs roaming around.</p>
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		<title>Where can I go on trail rides with my horse in massachusetts?</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 21 Dec 2011 00:53:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I have a horse, and want to go on trail rides with him around hay fields, forests and such. I am in the essex county area and don&#8217;t want to drive to far. Also have a dog, and would like him to be able to come along as well (very well behaved, and stays next [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I have a horse, and want to go on trail rides with him around hay fields, forests and such. I am in the essex county area and don&#8217;t want to drive to far. Also have a dog, and would like him to be able to come along as well (very well behaved, and stays next to me pretty much the whole time, so would not disrupt other riders).<br />
Thanks<br />
<br />North End</p>
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		<title>where are the stations that sell Ethanol free gasoline in Hays or Blanco county, Texas?</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 29 Oct 2011 03:25:14 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I have an older model tractor and the ethanol gasoline damages the hoses and seals in the fuel system
I do not think their are any as it is a federal law to blend in at least 10%  ethanol
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I have an older model tractor and the ethanol gasoline damages the hoses and seals in the fuel system<br />
<br />I do not think their are any as it is a federal law to blend in at least 10%  ethanol</p>
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		<title>In Texas what constitutes running a red light? How do I dispute a ticket?</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 08 Oct 2011 00:17:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I was in Hays county at night driving down a main road in a small town. I know the light turned yellow shortly before I passed through it but with a wet road and as close as I was to the light I could not safely stop. I know that it wasn&#8217;t red. I do [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I was in Hays county at night driving down a main road in a small town. I know the light turned yellow shortly before I passed through it but with a wet road and as close as I was to the light I could not safely stop. I know that it wasn&#8217;t red. I do not think it turned red while I was passing through it but it could have. A mile down the road, and onto the highway a police officer lit me up, pulled me over and told me I had run the light. On my citation he actually wrote speeding first, which I wasn&#8217;t because I use cruise control on everything, then he scratched that out and wrote running a stop sign but I didn&#8217;t pass any stop signs (I drive this road pretty often). The location is of the stop light, and I sure as heck know I didn&#8217;t go through when it was red, I&#8217;ve never done that. </p>
<p>In Texas, isn&#8217;t it true that if the light is yellow when you cross the line that even if it turns red a second later it&#8217;s not running a red? How can I dispute this? Do I stand a chance? Can I have it not appear on my record? I&#8217;ve never had ANY other tickets or citations and this really irks me. Seems like he was just looking for someone to pull over.<br />
Again. The light was NOT red when I went through it. It was yellow.<br />
<br />Here&#8217;s the Texas law, which includes this:</p>
<p>An operator of a vehicle facing only a steady red signal<br />
shall stop at a clearly marked stop line.  In the absence of a stop<br />
line, the operator shall stop before entering the crosswalk on the<br />
near side of the intersection.</p>
<p>http://law.onecle.com/texas/transportation/544.007.00.html</p>
<p>So I guess your defense would depend on where the &quot;line&quot; existed.</p>
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		<title>car inspection issue?</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 03 Sep 2011 13:07:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[okay so i live in texas and i was having quite the predicament i have a car registered in hays county but the insurance is in williamson county and i tried to get it inspected in hays but the guy said he couldnt and that he could get a fine since the innsuarce company has [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>okay so i live in texas and i was having quite the predicament i have a car registered in hays county but the insurance is in williamson county and i tried to get it inspected in hays but the guy said he couldnt and that he could get a fine since the innsuarce company has it as insured in wilco any help would be great<br />
gtfo my answer board  if your going to be a smartass like roger<br />
<br />well unpredicament your self, or park the car, whats it going to be?</p>
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		<title>Request for Initial Evidence (I-485)?</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 14 Aug 2011 04:17:33 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Hay,
Am from California. My Wife is my main sponsor/petitioner her income is not enough so my friend as Joint Sponsor has signed the form Affidavit of Support. His home is on mortgage and he is a business man. His particulars are given below:
1 &#8211; 2008 Tax Return is 56000USD
2 &#8211; 2009 Tax Return is 45000USD
4 [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hay,<br />
Am from California. My Wife is my main sponsor/petitioner her income is not enough so my friend as Joint Sponsor has signed the form Affidavit of Support. His home is on mortgage and he is a business man. His particulars are given below:<br />
1 &#8211; 2008 Tax Return is 56000USD<br />
2 &#8211; 2009 Tax Return is 45000USD<br />
4 &#8211; 2010 Tax Return is 31000USD<br />
including his assets (all his automobiles as Assets are =<br />
5 &#8211; Assets 40000USD<br />
so, this way his total amount including assets is 71,000/- USD which is i think meet the 125% of the federal poverty line.<br />
I sent everything all papers all together to US Department of Homeland Security but they sent me Pink Letter with my case file number. The thing i want to understand what they are demanding now from me i couldn&#8217;t get it please help me am writing the pink letter wordings here under what they highlighted :<br />
&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;-<br />
Based on the documents submitted with Form I-864, Affidavit of Support for the joint sponsor the income did not meet 125% (100% if military) of federal poverty line for the joint sponsor household size.</p>
<p>Submit evidence of assets that meet the standards listed below or obtain a different joint sponsor.<br />
Assets standards must equal the stated difference between the joint sponsor&#8217;s household income and 12% (100% if military) of the federal poverty line.</p>
<p>* Assets must equal the difference for applicant&#8217;s filing as orphans or a spouse or child of an active duty military member.<br />
* Assets must equal three time the difference for spouse or child of a United States Citizen.<br />
* Assets must equal five times the difference for all others.</p>
<p>Such evidence of assets includes:<br />
* Bank statements covering the last 12 months, or statements from an officer of the bank or other financial institution in which the sponsor has deposits, including deposit/withdrawal history for the last 12 months, or a statement from an officer of the bank or other financial institution in which the sponsor has deposits, including deposit/withdrawal history for the last 12 months, and current balance;<br />
* Evidence of ownership and value of stocks, bonds, and certificates of deposit;<br />
* Evidence of ownership and value/equity of other personal property and dates acquired;<br />
* Evidence of ownership, a recent licences appraisal or county tax assessment and any mortgage/lien or lien release of any real estate.<br />
======================================================================<br />
what they want now i really didn&#8217;t get ? they ask me to find another joint sponsor or they are demanding my friend&#8217;s assets proof really i couldn&#8217;t get please help me. am very worry because i have to send them back the reply otherwise they gonna cancel my case. please help please </p>
<p>thank you so much in advance<br />
Expanding my Question on answer from Uncle.please answer just this line what they are asking in this line?<br />
* Assets must equal three time the difference for spouse or child of a United States Citizen.</p>
<p>i really appreciate it.</p>
<p>Get an Aila Lawyer to go over the paperwork urgently</p>
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		<title>Please critique my book! Is it good? Would you read it?</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 05 Aug 2011 00:28:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[now i know i&#8217;ve posted this before but i really want more feedback!
PROLOGUE-
“Sorry I’m la-“ a pistol was pointed straight at my face as I entered the crowded class room.
“Stay away from our son!” Mr. Holcomb shielded Daniel from my puzzled gaze.
“What’s going on?” I stared pleadingly at my classmates for answers, only receiving shameful [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>now i know i&#8217;ve posted this before but i really want more feedback!</p>
<p>PROLOGUE-<br />
“Sorry I’m la-“ a pistol was pointed straight at my face as I entered the crowded class room.<br />
“Stay away from our son!” Mr. Holcomb shielded Daniel from my puzzled gaze.<br />
“What’s going on?” I stared pleadingly at my classmates for answers, only receiving shameful gazes and fallen heads.<br />
“We know what you are, Riley Anne. All of us do, and we want you to leave,” Daniel’s mother clutched her son without looking at me. Daniel’s face was shadowed. Not with his silky chestnut hair, but with grief and despair, as if he had lost a loved one.<br />
“Wha- What do you mean?” my stomach shriveled up to the size of a quarter and my knees buckled. Mrs. Holcomb pulled an old video cassette from her jacket pocket and released Daniel, slowly trudging towards the TV. On the screen, an image flickered. The video of our experiment with the professor in his office flashed across the ancient glass. It looked terrible.<br />
“Who the hell gave you this!?” I slammed my hand on the desk, denting its hard black surface.<br />
“We have a reliable source,” my teacher, Mr. Underwood, pulled the tape from the TV.</p>
<p>Chapter 1 &#8211; Party<br />
It rained the whole car ride to aunt Kathryn&#8217;s house. Everything about the cold, dark sky reminded me of my Aunt&#8217;s unwavering forbidding stares. I didn&#8217;t know why Daniel and I had been invited. Perhaps aunt Kathryn needed to perfect her biting wit, or maybe had grown bored insulting the neighbors in muttered undertones behind a mendacious smile and lukewarm tea. If not for Daniel, who slept restlessly in the passenger seat, as if he too felt the oppressive clouds bearing down on him as they drew nearer, I wouldn’t have even considered going. Daniel had been my boyfriend for the longest time. He had been there for me, even if it meant sacrificing something.<br />
The drive form Baltimore to Buda was unbearable. The landscape grew darker as we approached my aunt’s house. Passing over the Hays county line, a cold sensation trickled down my spine, as if I were pursuing death itself.<br />
“Whoa!” Daniel jerked forward in his seat, slapping his forehand on the window of my Xterra.<br />
“We just passed the county line,” I warned him, glancing at a six car pile-up on the opposite road.<br />
“Oh,” Daniel whispered hesitantly, rubbing his slightly bruised hand, “How much longer?”<br />
“About ten minuets so get ready,” I took the exit leading through a maze of trees, fading the atmosphere to pitch black aside from the faint glow from my headlights.</p>
<p>“This is her house?” Daniel stared in disbelief at the un-kept lawn.<br />
“It’s farther back, you dummy,” I giggled faintly at his assumption. The last giggle I would probably have for an eternity, or at least a week. Suddenly in the blackness of the lawn, a two dim porch lights flickered in the darkness. The silhouette of a petite figure leaped out one of the mahogany front doors. Racing towards us was my aunt Kathryn’s daughter, Helen. I always loved to see Helen, especially when she visited without Aunt Kathryn. It was usually her that kept me from a spiraling depression during visits. Her blonde, curly hair bounced playfully in my face as she constricted me with her thin arms.<br />
“Riley Anne! I’ve missed you so much! Come on! Come inside!” Helen pulled her baby blue night robe from the clutch of a dead rosebush inside the wrought iron gate, “Here, Daniel, let me help you.” Helen elevated our two massive suite cases in each arm, trudging up the wet grey stones. Auth Kathryn’s house was far too large for her pigmy self. There was an unoccupied second floor; the only exception was the bedroom. Below was a formal dining room gathering dust for twenty years connected to a kitchen the size of a small restaurant only used by Helen and the butler, Herbert. Finally there was a formal living room and a stunning tea room, commonly inhabited by aunt Kathryn herself.<br />
“Allow me?” Herbert waited directly inside of the doors, prepared for anything we threw at him.<br />
“Yeah, Herb. Take these to the two closest guest rooms, please,” our suit cases hit the tile with a massive THUMP! echoing endlessly through the vacant halls.<br />
<br />very cool!</p>
<p>One thing with the prologue though&#8230;it ends very abruptly on a not so exciting line&#8230;the rest was great but make the last line the best of all</p>
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		<title>Would you read this book?!?</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 01 Aug 2011 00:10:05 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Please dont let this scare you away, it&#8217;s fast to read through.
PROLOGUE-
“Sorry I’m la-“ a pistol was pointed straight at my face as I entered the crowded class room.
“Stay away from our son!” Mr. Holcomb shielded Daniel from my puzzled gaze.
“What’s going on?” I stared pleadingly at my classmates for answers, only receiving shameful gazes [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Please dont let this scare you away, it&#8217;s fast to read through.</p>
<p>PROLOGUE-<br />
“Sorry I’m la-“ a pistol was pointed straight at my face as I entered the crowded class room.<br />
“Stay away from our son!” Mr. Holcomb shielded Daniel from my puzzled gaze.<br />
“What’s going on?” I stared pleadingly at my classmates for answers, only receiving shameful gazes and fallen heads.<br />
“We know what you are, Riley Anne. All of us do, and we want you to leave,” Daniel’s mother clutched her son without looking at me.<br />
“Wha- What do you mean?” my stomach shriveled up to the size of a quarter and my knees buckled. Mrs. Holcomb pulled an old video cassette from her jacket pocket and released Daniel, slowly trudging towards the TV. On the screen, an image flickered. The video of our experiment with the professor in his office flashed across the ancient glass. It looked terrible.<br />
“Who the hell gave you this!?” I slammed my hand on the desk, denting its hard black surface. Lucas slithered out of my bag and hovered silently, only inches from my head.<br />
“We have a reliable source,” my teacher, Mr. Underwood, pulled the tape from the TV.</p>
<p>Chapter 1 &#8211; Party<br />
It rained the whole car ride to Aunt Kathryn&#8217;s house. Everything about the cold, dark sky reminded me of my Aunt&#8217;s unwavering forbidding stares. I didn&#8217;t know why Daniel and I had been invited. Perhaps Aunt Kathryn needed to perfect her biting wit or had grown bored insulting the neighbors in muttered undertones behind a mendacious smile and lukewarm tea. If not for Daniel, who slept restlessly in the passenger seat as if he too felt the oppressive clouds bearing down on him as they drew nearer, I wouldn’t have even considered going.<br />
The drive form Baltimore to Buda was unbearable. The landscape grew darker as we approached my Aunt’s house. Passing over the Hays county line, a cold sensation trickled down my spine, as if I were pursuing death itself.<br />
“Whoa!” Daniel jerked forward in his seat, slapping his forehand on the window of my Xterra.<br />
“We just passed the county line,” I warned him, glancing at a six car pile-up on the opposite road.<br />
“Oh,” Daniel whispered hesitantly, rubbing his slightly bruised hand, “How much longer?”<br />
“About ten minuets so get ready,” I took the exit leading through a maze of trees, fading the atmosphere to pitch black aside from the faint glow from my headlights.</p>
<p>“This is her house?” Daniel stared in disbelief at the un-kept lawn.<br />
“It’s farther back, you dummy,” I giggled faintly at his assumption. The last giggle I would probably have for an eternity, or at least a week. Suddenly in the blackness of the lawn, a two dim porch lights flickered in the darkness. The silhouette of a petite figure leaped out one of the mahogany front doors. Racing towards us was my Aunt Kathryn’s daughter, Helen. I always loved to see Helen, especially when she visited without Aunt Kathryn. It was usually her that kept me from a spiraling depression during visits. Her blonde, curly hair bounced playfully in my face as she constricted me with her thin arms.<br />
“Riley Anne! I’ve missed you so much! Come on! Come inside!” Helen pulled her baby blue night robe from the clutch of a dead rosebush inside the wrought iron gate, “Here, Daniel, let me help you.” Helen elevated our two massive suite cases in each arm, trudging up the wet grey stones. Auth Kathryn’s house was far too big for her small self. There was an unoccupied second floor; the only exception was the bedroom. Below was a formal dining room gathering dust for twenty years connected to a kitchen the size of a small restaurant only used by Helen and the butler, Herbert. Finally there was a formal living room and a stunning tea room, inhabited by the small Aunt Kathryn herself.<br />
“Allow me?” Herbert waited directly inside of the doors, prepared for anything we threw at him.<br />
“Yeah, Herb. Take these to the two closest guest rooms, please,” our suit cases hit the tile with a massive THUMP!<br />
and yes i wrote it<br />
<br />I will say it I&#8217;m a little jealous. that was really good. you have a way with words the story went fluidly no gaps in between (besides the prologue and chapt. 1)<br />
My only advice for you would be to not cut to the chase so quickly and explain the characters more. Overall very good.</p>
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		<title>Would you read this book?</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[Chapter 1 &#8211; Party
It rained the whole car ride to her Aunt Kathryn&#8217;s house. Everything about the cold, dark sky reminded me of my Aunt&#8217;s unwavering forbidding stares. I didn&#8217;t know why Daniel and I had been invited. Perhaps Aunt Kathryn needed to perfect her biting wit or had grown bored insulting the neighbors in [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Chapter 1 &#8211; Party</p>
<p>It rained the whole car ride to her Aunt Kathryn&#8217;s house. Everything about the cold, dark sky reminded me of my Aunt&#8217;s unwavering forbidding stares. I didn&#8217;t know why Daniel and I had been invited. Perhaps Aunt Kathryn needed to perfect her biting wit or had grown bored insulting the neighbors in muttered undertones behind a false smile and lukewarm tea. If not for Daniel, who slept restlessly in the passenger seat as if he too felt the oppressive clouds bearing down on him as they drew nearer, I wouldn’t have even considered going.<br />
The drive form Baltimore to Buda was unbearable. The landscape grew darker as we approached my Aunt’s house. Passing over the Hays county line, a cold sensation trickled down my spine, as if I were pursuing death itself.<br />
“Woah!” Daniel jerked forward in his seat, slapping his forehand on the window of my Xterra. He must have felt it too.<br />
“We just passed the county line,” I warned him, glancing at a six car pile-up on the opposite road.<br />
“Oh,” Daniel whispered slowly, rubbing his slightly bruised hand, “How much longer?”<br />
“About ten minuets so get ready,” I took the exit leading through a maze of trees, fading the atmosphere to pitch black aside from the faint glow from my headlights.</p>
<p>“This is her house?” Daniel stared in disbelief at the un-kept lawn.<br />
“It’s farther back, you dummy,” I giggled faintly at his assumption. The last giggle I would probably have for an eternity, or at least a week. Suddenly in the blackness of the lawn, a single porch light flickered in the darkness. A small figure leaped out of the front door. Racing towards us was my Aunt Kathryn’s daughter, Helen. I always loved to see Helen, especially when she visited without Aunt Kathryn. It was usually her that kept me from a spiraling depression during visits. Her blonde curly hair bounced playfully in my face as she constricted me with her stick-thin arms.<br />
“Riley Anne! I’ve missed you so much! Come on! Come inside!” Helen pulled her baby blue night robe from the clutch of a rosebush inside the gate, “Here, Daniel, let me help you. Mother is asleep. Are you hungry? Or just tired? Come inside.” Helen carried several of our bags inside of the narrow doorframe.</p>
<p>Are there any changes that need to be made? How should i describe her house? This isn&#8217;t the whole chapter just a small chunk.</p>
<p>Riley Anne is one person BTW<br />
yeah i meant to change the first senctence lol didnt mean to. sorry!<br />
<br />Yes it&#8217;s very well-written. You have a good, professional style, better than some published authors! Can&#8217;t really tell where the plot is going from this excerpt but it seems like it&#8217;s going to be good. The only changes that need to be made are purely proof-reading stuff &#8211; your first sentence is in third person while the rest is in first,Aside from that, a few typing errors, nothing more.</p>
<p>Very good so far, keep it up!</p>
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